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Nice! I like the free theme to it .
Nice! I like the free theme to it .
An excellent, excellent poem to return on my friend! Very nice. One, and only one, critique: you saying 'kaput' is a bit of an informal switch that I found odd. If you can find a better fit, it may prove a better choice.
you're an excellent writer
Thank you pebs. Ya, I meant 'of' but must have typed 'or' in a hurry lolI really like that one! I generally hate AAAA, but I think it helped this poem with emphasis. Great job mate!
Btw-did you mean words OF valor? You put OR. Third stanza